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Red as roses
Question poses
Eyes meet
Hearts greet

A delicate dance
Words entrance
Drawn in
Bonds begin

Some subtle shift
A gentle drift
Steps slow
Eyes glow

Feelings stir
Passions blur
Walls crumble
as fingers fumble

No single cause
No hidden clause
Hands clutch
Bodies touch

Pulses rush
faces blush
innocent dove
they ‘re in love

Paths converge
As souls merge
Through darkest day
They never part way

past death’s door
dancing evermore
in heaven above
God bless true love

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This poem is the full and in my opinion better version of an earlier poem I wrote called one night. while I wrote it I pictured... well actually I would like to hear what you pictured when you read it. I create this poem for three different contests. Yes I had all three in mind when I finished the poem. I hope you don't mind but I like the way this fit in all three contests. The first contest is :iconsoul-poets:'s unexpected love contest ([link]). Then there is #InspireandCreate's romantic antics contest ([link]). Last but not least is :iconh3llzang3l:'s the meaning of love ([link]). This is an original piece that I wrote for your respective contests (so I did follow the rules). If you don't like that I have entered it in multiple groups o well I did.

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:iconterra2341:
~Terra2341 Feb 27, 2013  Student
I love your shtuff! It's so good and pretteh :P
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:icontfxman:
=tfxman Feb 28, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
thank you I am really glad you think so!!!!!
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:iconterra2341:
Mood: Joy ~Terra2341 Feb 28, 2013  Student
No prob :icongoodjobplz: :icongrin--plz:
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:icontaiwanesedreamer:
Mood: Joy ~Taiwanesedreamer Feb 23, 2013   General Artist
Very beautiful. It conjured such sweet thoughts.
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:icontfxman:
=tfxman Feb 25, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you so much!
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~palesile Feb 23, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
I'm not a huge fan of poems that rhyme but this one is quite good! It's actually like a cute little love story. Simple but captures the basics of true love which I thought was adorable. Nice work :)
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:icontfxman:
=tfxman Feb 25, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you that is what I see too.
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~AquaticFox93 Feb 22, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
It's amazing!! I hope to find a love like this one day...

When I read it, I pictured people meeting by chance. Then, they kissed and it progressed to something more erotic. They ended up together forever <3
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=tfxman Feb 25, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
That is similar to what I saw too.
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~AquaticFox93 Feb 26, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
:D
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